Adjusting to a New Schedule

Last time I said that I got a new job. The job is eight in the morning to four thirty in the afternoon. Most of my work for my visual novel Trapped is done on Sunday's and in the Library. I figured out that a place away from home and people I do some kind of errand or choir was a good idea. The major plus to doing work in the Library is that there is always different people and things to look at unlike my room which stays the same everyday. The whole story for Trapped has been typed into the Ren'py. Now I am going through and fixing grammatical errors and trying to make ideas in the story clearer to the reviewer. I have to admit that writing in first-person is not my strong point. When I wrote fan fiction and original fiction in my spare time third person would always be the point of view in which I would write in. The major bonus to writing in first person is the player gets to know the main character a lot more. I guess I will have to practice writing in first person and look up a few writing tutorials in the future. Hopefully by next month I can move on to the artwork for this visual novel. Then after doing the artwork I will make sure to have my beta reader play the game and tell me what she thinks of the story.